You have made a good start here and you have covered most of what is needed. You have provided clear information and presented it well.
To improve: - add far more detail on audience and use the four terms covered in class. you need to do this for the existing advert and your new proposed one - add a slide for your new idea - what exactly happens (beginning, middle and end) - add details on the BCAP code and say whether your new ad would infringe it - add a reference list
Horatio,
ReplyDeleteYou have made a good start here and you have covered most of what is needed. You have provided clear information and presented it well.
To improve:
- add far more detail on audience and use the four terms covered in class. you need to do this for the existing advert and your new proposed one
- add a slide for your new idea - what exactly happens (beginning, middle and end)
- add details on the BCAP code and say whether your new ad would infringe it
- add a reference list
Ellie
The changes have not been made - this needs to be completed as a matter of urgency.
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